Kerum Kosha//Male// Breeder

[Kerum Kosha]

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Kerum Kosha 18 Male Torrentia Tamer IMAGE URL[*/IMG] Your character's description should go here somehow, whether it is written or an image. The space will hold a 280 x 245 image. If you need help with that, feel free to PM an admin. Personality: Kerum is confident and full of energy. He is easy to get along with as long as you treat your pokemon with care. If not well then he might just beat you upside the head with a log. He is very ambitious and won't let anyone hold him back History: Kerum was born into a family that was always into pokemon. He has 8 older sibling that were all different types of trainers. They mostly were trainers but a few of them become racers and coordinators. However only the oldest was a breeder and he looked up to her since he was a little boy. Kerum is the youngest and the last of the children from his family and he wishes to make his family proud. Most of his childhood he spent alone, wandering around the local area and watching pokemon as they thrived in nature. Making sure not to disturb their habitat as he did so. It was enjoyable and kept him out of trouble and more importantly out of his busy parents way. He lived a good childhood the family had plenty of money so he didn't have to work to feed himself or family. He had a decent relationship with all his siblings, most of then were never home but when they did it was always a fun time. His parents worked long hours which would bother him some days but he knew that he would move out eventually and then he would never see them so this would just be practice for that time. To Kerum's horror his family would not allow him to start his pokemon adventure until he passed there own personal tests. It wasn't until he was 18 that he passed them feeling that he was now capable of going out into the world on his own and fulfill his desire to be a breeder. Kerum has always had a distinct facination with water pokemon being from Torrentia would do that to anyone, or turn them away from it. He particular likes the rarer ones that are water based but also have other types. He has no particular favorite though and hopes to just get water pokemon as his starters.

[dragon]

Firstly, we don't have "tamer" as an option. Do you mean trainer? If so, change it to that. We have the trainer, breeder, coordinator, or racer paths he can choose. Secondly, you either need an image or a description of his image. The content of his personality and history seem good to go. There is one slight detail in the history where it says "most are never home" and then says "but when they are". I would change it to something like "most do not visit home very often" and then "but when they do". It works much better that way.

Fix all that and you're good to go. I'll look at it again after that's fixed and see about approving it.