Michael l Trainer l Male

[michael]

[atrb= cellSpacing,5,true][atrb=cellpadding,0px,true][atrb=border,0,true] [atrb=style, width:550px; bTable] I know in this world what is true, Victory Seekers / Team Necro will see me through!

Hello, my name is Michael Drake Currently, I am 16 Obviously, I am a Male My home town is Torrentia City What I really want to be is a Trainer ] Michael has a normal body build, not to much muscle but enough that hes not flabby.Most of his muscle mass is in his legs so that he can run for a long time. He has black hair, that usually looks like its combed but it just like that naturally, and hazel brown eyes, that make you feel like he cares when he looks at people. . He has broad shoulders and a wide back, people joke that its like that because he takes everyone around hims problems onto himself. He wears a orange jumpsuit which is comprised of orange baggy pants that is held up by a dark blue belt, which his bag is attached to. On his chest he wears a skin tight dark blue body shirt, on top of that is a orange jacket with dark blue trim. The jackets sleeve only go to right below his elbows and the end of the sleeve is also a dark blue, the jacket is mostly zipped up but is left open enough to see the top of his shirt underneath. This is how I am, take it or leave it! Michael is a fairly happy-go-lucky kind of guy, the kind of young man who enjoys a laugh with people around him as well as a prank or two. However he's not such a nice guy that he hasn't made enemies or rivals; in his opinion "any jackass can go through life without offending people" and he has made a few over time. He feels strongly about thing and will not back down if he thinks he is right. He loves having a challenge and learning new and interest things that peek his interest, such as facts about the land and the Pokémon that are there. He tries to act serious and adult-like but can't seem to shake the playfulness and cockiness that comes with his age. He loves his Pokémon more then he does himself he would protect his Pokémon at all cost even if the cost is his life. When it comes to other Pokémon he cares for them also but he won't take a bullet for them. Michael is very competitive when it comes to battle, he doesn't mind losing but he will always put his best into it. Michael enjoys letting his Pokémon walk beside him or even ride on his shoulders if they are small enough. If Michael see's a injured Pokémon on the side of the road he will stop to see if he could help, and he might catch it if he wants. He is always looking to catch more Pokémon to add to his team that he thinks of as a family. Micheal hates to see his Pokémon in trouble, if he says to stop and the other person doesn't he will attack the trainer himself with all he has. The story of how I came to be. Michael was born to a beautiful mother and a strong fathe. He found himself playing with the local Pokémon more then with the other children of the town, his mother told him that his father was the same way when he was young. When Michael was 8 his father came home from work and told them that he was going on a journey to become a Pokémon master. This made Michael very proud all he could think about was his father was going to be a Pokémon master. When his father left he took with him a Slakoth, that had been playing around the house for as long as he could remember, and a Kecleon ,that had attacked the town due to no food. Michaels father caught him and tamed him now he was one of the nicest Pokémon he had ever seen. After a few years Michael had grown into a young man as his mother said and began to help out where he was needed, most of the time it was in the Pokecenter. Micheal loved healing Pokémon and soon got good at it. He even did it alone some times, When the nurse had a house call or something. She even gave him complements and asked when he was coming back every time he had to go home, he has a small crush on the nurse so he was that alot. At the age of 16 Micheal's father came back from trying to beat all the Pokémon gyms, He had failed and didn't beat the last gym. Julkins father only had 3 Pokémon with him when he got back from his journey , Slaking, Kecleon and Skarmory. This made Michael wonder if possible his father failed due to not having enough pokemon with him. He really looked up to his father being able to beat most the gyms with just these to pokemon, Julkin wanted to catch a full team of 6. He wanted to try to only use pokemon that were Darkl types in someway. After a month or so of Julkin’s father being home, he made a decision to set out on his own journey to take on the Pokémon League challenge.

Panpour
Caught at Level 5

Nickname: Atl
Gender: Male
Type: Water
Ability: Gluttony: A held Berry is eaten earlier than usual when HP is low.
Height: 2'00"
Weight: 29.8 Lbs
EXP: (0/10)
EXP Gained: 0
Level: 5
Health: 25
[c]Moveset:
1. Scratch
2. Leer
3. Aqua Ring
4. Aqua Tail

Items:



X5

X5

X3

X2

X5

[dragon]

There are some spelling errors and such, especially in the appearance. I would also shorten the description of the appearance as only so much of it shows up in the block. That or just put an image there and that would suffice. The personality and history don't need to be re-worked so much as it does need minor editing. Look for spelling, grammatical, and punctuation errors. Also, a glaring issue is the way you have "paragraphed" your personality and history. A whole paragraph is five to eight sentences long. So nothing less than five sentences per paragraph. I would mash some of that together to make whole paragraphs. It's not really the content so much as it is the presentation of it. Work on that, and I'll come back again to look at it for approval.


Oh! Unless you have had a lab thread, you can't have those items or that Pokemon.