Alice Gration//Female//Coordinator

[Alice Gration]

[atrb= cellSpacing,5,true][atrb=cellpadding,0px,true][atrb=border,0,true] [atrb=style, width:550px; bTable] I know in this world what is true, Victory Seekers / Team Necro will see me through!

Alice Gration 17 Your character's age in years. Female Your character's gender. Blizzara City Where your character comes from. Coordinator Your character's track [Trainer, etc]. IMAGE URL[*/IMG] Your character's description should go here somehow, whether it is written or an image. The space will hold a 280 x 245 image. If you need help with that, feel free to PM an admin. Alice is very stuck up for lack of better words. She holds herself up high seeing others as less then herself. However if someone proofs they are her equal they will have life long respect. She also comes of rude in the way she speaks but she is not always meaning it so. Your character's personality. Alice was born to a very wealthy family, her father was a world class breeder and her mother was a star coordinator winning contests left and right with her trusty female duo, Froslass and Gardevoir. Alice spent most of her days following her mother around watching her win contest after contest so enthralled by the entire event. When Alice was 13 though a tragic event struck the family. Her mother got ill, so ill that she was bed ridden and couldn't talk much before she lost conciousness. The doctors could not figure out what was wrong with her and after a year of the illness she passed away. Her last words to her daughter were "Become the greatest Coodinator for me." Alice cried for weeks locking herself in her room and refused to come out the only company she had was her faithful friends. The two friends were a female ralts and a female snorunt. They were the offspring of her mothers prized pokemon who passed away on the same day out of grief. The Ralts was named Rose and Snorunt was named Grace. Finally after her spell of grief she walked out of her room head held high. She demanded her father send her to the best school for coordinators and from that day on she spent all but the summer at her new school learning the ways of being a coordinator. She donned on her mothers kimino and refused to take it off and put on normal clothes. She would be in character for her contests at all time. Finally she knew she was ready, saying goodbye to her father she left the cold town behind and headed to Dust Town, she was going to start her adventure and become the best coordinator who walked Varaia. Your character's history. This area will scroll if you write enough.

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There needs to be an image for your character, for starters. Secondly, I would add more to the personality and correct the spelling errors such as "proof" when it should be "prove" and "of" when it should be "off". The history is fine enough, I'd look for spelling errors and such though. Also realize you cannot start off with those two Pokemon you mentioned. She would have to leave them behind and get her own starters in a lab thread.

Work on that and I'll come back and have another look at approving her.