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Post by lox on Jul 18, 2012 14:40:03 GMT -6
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I know in this world what is true, Team Necro will see me through! | Hello, my name is Zandra Black, of the Black City Black's.
Currently, I am 22.
Obviously, I am a woman.
My home town is Black city, obviously.
What I really want to be is a racer.
This is how I am, take it or leave it! Zandra grew up spoiled, always getting what she wanted, but it never pleased her. She wanted something more fast paced then what her parents were allowing her to do. She loves speed and raceing and loves to party. She's very worldly and loves to flirt. More then one male has fallen under her spell.
The story of how I came to be. The Blacks, Zandra's family, are from old money. Black City in Unova, was named after them and they helped create it. The population often grows and lessens, but no matter what, Black City is where it is at.
Zandra always got what she wanted growing up as a child and she enjoyed twisting people around her little finger, but she was still bored. She didn't enjoy how slow life seemed outside of the clubs and fancy dinners with other wealthy kids her own age.
She was 20 when she discovered racing, and she was quickly hooked.She loves the feeling of wind through her hair as she speeds down the track. She prefers the jockey races, but will coach on occasion. Report to Mod - Link to Post - Back to Top Logged
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Post by dragon on Oct 15, 2012 14:03:21 GMT -6
I tried clicking on the image, but it gave me an error page. I don't know if that's on my end or the link's. I'd check that out. Other than that, I would add more fluff to your history. The "paragraphs" aren't whole paragraphs. Five to eight sentences is a whole paragraph. Edit all that and I'll come back again to look it over for approval.
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